I’m just going to say it, I’m not cut out to be a tutor. I don’t know how to give negative feedback, the only negative feedback was the things I was saying about my own pitch in comparison to the ones I was reviewing. How do you guys do it? Get back in the comments below ;). Moving on.
Here are my review comments.
I really enjoyed reading through everyone’s ideas and how it is all going to play out in the end result, of course reading it all made me unsure of if I was even doing my DA correctly because reflecting on others is the best way to reflect on yourself as well! Honestly, I sat there with a pen and paper reading through, writing comments and all I could think was, wow I missed that, and I missed that, and no wonder I got the mark I got. But I enjoyed it, because it has now made me realise what I can do differently in these blog posts, and it has also given me access to the blogs of my peers so I can see what they are doing for these posts.
This post is the hardest to write because I don’t know how to get 500 words and 2 minutes of audio content out of talking about giving feedback. This is probably why the first two paragraphs might sound like mindless rambling, but I think they give a good insight into my self-reflection.
What I think was great is that people commented on my own post, and the feedback really helped in fine-tuning my DA because I was so lost on the concept of what we were supposed to be doing. The feedback on my own blog and the feedback I was giving other blogs really did help in clearing up what the overarching DA is supposed to look like.
After analysing the feedback I gave I realise I could probably talk less about the aesthetics, but to me, as a reader, they are what draw me in and all three of the girls I reviewed did it really well! I think I addressed the usage of terminology well (but I felt bad because my own pitch had little to none), and I appreciated that all three were set out slightly different yet all three met the criteria. I was doing my own ethnographic research on the students of BCM, and how when given the same task we all handle it a little bit differently.
For future feedback like I said before, I could be a little less flowery and include more detail about grammar, punctuality, how the post reads and how the pitch video views. I didn’t mention the actual pitch in much of my feedback so for future comments I would like to add more about the video.
Overall I enjoyed getting an insight into what my peers are doing, sometimes I feel like our DA’s are our little secret that we want to hide from everyone else, this enabled everyone to share and help us build on our own work!
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